 CommentsDevious Comments I totally agree with you when you say the syringe would be better centered. Honestly I had many problems using flash and the lower part of the photo isn't so good.. so I decided to cut it. Probably I will retake the shot in the future, when I'll be a better photographer XD
Thank you so much, your critique made me feel really happy! -- brosandi. og ég fæ blóðnasir og ég stend alltaf upp.  ^^ it's a really good idea, and I can't wait to see it when you get it even better.
Have a wonderful day! -- They say I should not write this way writing till the break of day but I care not what they say for they are why I am this way Jody + Sabrina =  Nov. 8th 2009 |
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it feels almost unfinished, but I can't say quite why.
I like the way the coffee beans are spread out (I'm assuming they're coffee beans, I don't think I've ever seen any, forgive me if I'm wrong!), and I like how in the second part, they're in the syringe.
The placement of the syringe is nice, except I would have liked to see it centered, almost - because you do have the end of the needle in the shot, I'd almost like to see the other end of the needle, but I'm not sure if that would detract, so take that with a grain of salt.
I also like how you framed the set...I think it really adds to the overall look.
All in all - good shot!